tip: "sherlock (tv)" m/m NOT "sherlock holmes/john watson"
I really like the characters you've created. Both Jacob and Alexander had very distinct voice, IMO. I saw a few links back to the lyrics which were very nice touches.
Posted Mon 26
Following the lyrics seemed important to me, since I don't know a thing about nuclear wars or military actions and thus couldn't place the story in the midst of the song's events. It's nice to know that people can catch the references.
Posted Mon 02