tip: katekyou "alternate universe" sort:>words
oh wow. This is so intense and gorgeous and...I love your grasp of both characters and their complexities; Riza's so analytical but so cautious that she has a lot of justified, built up paranoia. And it can be easy to forget how even though Sloth seems so calm, her mind is strange to the point where she's almost unhinged despite how she is outwardly composed. The part where she deconstructs all the sins...you wonder the road she went down, thinking about that.'"Are you a wrathful person, Liza?"... "Are you tired of self-restraint?"' I love how those two lines and the surrounding context build off one another.
Posted Sat 17