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  1. 'Wake up and smell the epiphany, Dean, I guess you’re not as straight as you thought.’ i'm laughing so hard at this xD
    you did a good job, but all i want to mention is the lack of lube. it is very difficult to have buttsex without lube and without a massive amount of pain, so maybe try changing that a bit! other than that i really liked this :)

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      Hmm, you're right, I should be more explicit (I think initially I meant "there was a good deal of awkward fumbling" to include the acquiring of lube or some lube-like substance). I'm glad you otherwise liked it! This was like my second attempt at writing anything that resembled a sex scene....

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