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1. Stultiloquentia

   

   Fantastic characterizations -- Jeanie's so sympathetic, and I love your sharp-eyed Lizzie -- and your prose is absolutely gorgeous. Points --> She wondered whether goblin men had stolen all of Jeanie's maiden sweetness to plump and swell their unholy winter fruits, leaving none for chaste and wholesome flowers, or whether it was her own secret guilt that poisoned her virginal plot.

   And how great that it's *Lizzie* who's tempted? Brilliant!

   Posted Fri 01 Jan 2010 12:59PM EST

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2. 1. mayhap

      

      Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

      Posted Mon 04 Jan 2010 09:39AM EST

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