Comment on David Strider Versus the Turkey Legged Newborn

  1. What is this nonsense.

    Why is there not more of it.

    Get to writing damn it, right fucking now.

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    1. fuck the police

      I reserve the right to write a story based on a webcomic that pauses at inappropriate times that includes inappropriate pauses.

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      1. I reserve the right to totally frog you after summerfest bra I don't care if its your mom's van we're taking.

        But seriously, wow! Look at how much you've improved in just a few stories! Your prose is really tightening up, and the silliness feels much more natural and like part of the story instead of a break from it. Great work.

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        1. fuck the police

          Ha, thanks. It feels a lot more natural writing stuff out. Hopefully the practice will help make the longer story better. Next chapter is going to be trying out the whole first person flashback commentary gig, so hopefully your KIND LIES will MOTIVATE ME to not FUCK IT UP.

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