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  1. *whimpers* I am not sure whom I feel worse for, here!

    (Except that the back of my brain keeps whispering about how many damn times there are ghosts in the dS-verse already.)

    Posted Tue 28 Jul 2009 05:13PM EDT

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    1. thefourthvine

      Okay, I just now saw this comment, and I am deeply, deeply amused. Because of course there's a ghost in the sequel. Which I should really see if I can dig up. Hmmm.

      Anyway, thanks for reading my token non-lighthearted dS story!

      Posted Thu 22 Apr 2010 12:23AM EDT

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      1. Elizabeth

        Oooooooooooooh. Sequel?

        Posted Thu 22 Apr 2010 07:08AM EDT

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        1. thefourthvine

          Yeah. Punk made me write it; she said the story (which was written for a challenge and OVERDUE) was unfinished as it stood, and she would only let me post the story if I wrote the sequel.

          I was trying to convey the ghost thing with Vecchio's antsy behavior. He's not just depressed, and he's not just grieving; he's also losing his mind because he keeps seeing Stella everywhere, and she keeps trying to be REASONABLE, and she's fucking dead, so she DOESN'T GET TO BE REASONABLE ANYMORE.

          And then Ray shows up and he can see her, too, and Fraser has two basketcases on his hands. I thought it would be fun to see someone other than Fraser haunted.

          Posted Thu 22 Apr 2010 11:13PM EDT

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          1. Elizabeth

            And yet I see it not, on your Works page!

            Whither art thou, sequel? Whither?

            Posted Fri 23 Apr 2010 10:04AM EDT

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