oh, oh, beautiful. I love Duv, it's such a treat to see such a wonderful portrait of him. You have some great lines in here -- such as pain like a butterfly, and the marigolds, and remembering his aunt as a person, not just a symbol. you've got his relationship with Miles just right.
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Elsane on Chapter 4
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