Comment on Equinox of Penitance

  1. This chapter was absolutely stunning and has been my favorite one of the entire series so far, and trust me, that is saying a LOT!! The depth of intimacy between them, both physically and emotionally, was utterly breathtaking in both its gentleness and intensity. I LOVED when they held hands while Liv was pleasuring Amanda; it was a tenderness between them that has been lacking so far and has obviously been waiting to come out; I think it has been hidden all along underneath everything else that was happening in their relationship and it was so lovely to read about. I loved when Liv told Amanda that she wasn't going to lie there and pretend she didn't need love, and when she forgave her at the end of the chapter. Such an amazing ending to a wonderful chapter and something I've been waiting for for a very long time!! I'm so glad they are moving forward with each other in a different way now. Incredible work!!! :)

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    1. Wow your favorite? That's saying a lot! I'm glad it lived up to your expectations after all they've been through to get to this moment. I tried to pack as many emotions into as possible because I wanted it to more than all the strife and hate they felt throughout the rest of the series. I know I tortured you through this whole thing but if the payoff was worth it I did my job :-) Thank you so so much for all your wonderful comments and all your support. You know I appreciate it so much :-)

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