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  1. I love how Amanda is laid bare in this chapter, how she finally hits her breaking point and how Olivia is finally able to break through her barriers. You do such a good job of letting us see past that wall as it crumbles brick by brick. I am anxious to see what happens at 1PP when they testify.

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    1. Thank you!!! I really wanted this moment to be everything and more...to overshadow what has come before even if only for one night. We know and they know it doesn't fix everything but to finally reach the point is the beginning of a better future. Thank you so much for reading and commenting :-)

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