Comment on A Petal Among Thorns

  1. That makes sense. It wasn't so much that the pain went away or I forgot about it while writing or anything - I just figure that while she's leaning over Kain she's not moving much except to cast. And Kain wasn't supposed to be the focus of the manikin, it was the fact that a crystal *copy* of Kain was lying there. Like I said, though, your comment makes sense and I can see why it came across that way. I'd like to change it because I want to make sure this is the best version of Petal it can possibly be. :)

    I really, really appreciate you taking the time to help out. Like I said, your continued support of this fic means a lot.

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