Oh wow, this is so lovely. All the little details you have in the world building (the scarcity of chocolate, Haiti being one of the advanced nations) are amazing; they're tiny, but add so much to this story. Especially love the way you handle the Natalia/Steve/Tony build-up; the matter of fact way she responds is SO great! I too am sad that there's not a sequel with the three of them having sex forever. :( Would love to read that as well.
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Posted Sun 08 Jul 2012 01:12AM EDT
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