I really love this! First of all, the semi-AU-ness of it - it all works out very neatly, and you get their characters right even despite the somewhat different setting, adapting them to the circumstances... and I love that you're taking your time with it - the pacing is great, nothing is happening too fast. Really wonderful!
Glad the pacing's acceptable and not overly slow or dragging XD I don't think I could write something FAST to save my life, so I don't think there's any worry of that happening XD Hope I continue to bring quality stuff!
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